For years on end you’ve kept me prisoned
But now you should know, I have seasoned
Too oft you left my screams in the dark
And in your time you had your lark
Hush! Hear! The clouds thunder
You’ve time! Don’t fight! Just surrender!
Beware! Lest, the grounds below move
Now I’ll emerge from your groove
I will now make me free
Its now I’ll take off from the tree
It’s now my time to take the flight
And nothing can stop this passion alight
Hold your breath and watch me go
Yours days of gold have been sold
Now you’ll rot in your grave,
Your each step, now I shall pave!
Vengeance I felt, now I am free
But do not judge, blame not me
I have come to be free,
So long I’ll stay with my dreams!
Oh by the way, i was talking about a little birdie in a cage, whose owner was.. hmmm.. very nasty..
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5 comments:
Marvelous...Amazing...Incredible..I sometimes wonder how in this world, zaphire has got such a talent...keep it up gal...u did a wonderful job...u r really very talented!!!
Good Job..... If you have accompanied this with a painting of urs..... I find your painting more emoting.......would have added to the feel
u knw wat.....i'm really amazed....u hv such imagination...always thought u r very talented....keep it up!!! Do u add ur pics wid ur poem!!!
whoa new style of poem... atleast for me... hey poetress r we supposed to read it like its written... u knw stressin on the CAPITAL words.. it seems i am on stage when i read it... neways jus kiddin.. i wish i could write a lill like that...
I love this poem ...needless to say anything else ... and i like rain too ...both are really classy poems ... but you can out do yourselves and you know dat ... thoughj i must say .. .that ..this poem seemed more like a mix of a linkin park and a creed song ... and ahem .. i did try it out .. and i think we can rap it out with sum grunting and roaring .... yeah ... we can maybe make a song out of it after all !!! ...hehe ... nice work ..,kiddo
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